Interrupting a Great Story

When I think about why I love to read, I think about getting so lost in the story that I can’t hear the teakettle whistling or even feel the need to reach for a cookie. Perhaps the story has the kind of dialogue that lets me see the characters in full animation sparking words and phrases back and forth like a tennis match. Sometimes the author is such a wordsmith that the village comes to life with stores, sidewalks, children, and a mountain behind and I just know that I’ve been there. If the writer is exquisite, the words flow like poetry, oozing out like oil paints to wrap my soul in time and place. When the story captures me, it flows and I am carried away to other places, other times, and it is brilliant. I don’t like to have a great story interrupted, especially by the author themselves.

Unfortunately, the best writers can be ruined by bad formatting or poor editing. Recently I read an e-book that was written by a true wordsmith, a writer that pushed the story along with the best dialogue and turned a phrase with pure poetry, a story-tellers dream. The grammar was perfect, but the dialogue was set up with odd punctuation marks that forced me to remember when a character was talking and who it was. The other problem was the writer’s love affair with historic authenticity, to the point that there were footnotes at the bottom of each page. If I had been reading a paper book, I could have stayed with the flow of the story, but the e-book formatted on my Kindle in such a way that the footnotes usually ended up in the middle of the page and often in the middle of a sentence, so my eyes would have to jump over the footnote to continue with the thought. Good story floats imagination and poor grammar or distracting format can build a dam in the middle of the strongest river.

– Bethany

One response to “Interrupting a Great Story”

  1. Stacey Martin, "The E Word" says:

    Bethany, this is great advice. As a new writer who has only recently had my first book converted into Kindle format and who has never seen an ebook in my life, I can tell you, apologetically, that it never even crossed my mind to check the formatting on the footnotes in the electronic version of my work. Meaculpa. Thanks for the heads up and I promise to do better next time!

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